I Comment to Cement

The World will comment
Making you resent
Kindness will be absent
In them hundred percent

Just like that giving remarks
World will give you zero marks
It will destroy your brain’s sparks
It will bite you like deadly sharks

May be parents’ love is deep
Your sorrow makes them weep
If defeats in life you reap
They only will not at all sleep

Surely their love alone is true
As your losses give them blue
They only will come to rescue
As they too much love you

Actually what I meant is
All the souls we cannot please
We must preserve our peace
We must create a masterpiece

If parents have any doubt
We must prove our clout
Our skill we must show out
Then hope in their mind will sprout

They may stop criticizing
And start lavishly praising
Their plans they will be revising
They may stop advising

One is to all a funny joke
Just yet another spoke
All will rag and try to provoke
Our guts we have to convoke

If we prove our worth
We can gain mirth
We must win on this Earth
To celebrate our birth

What I meant is try very hard
Let not discouragement retard
We have,to support, the great Lord
Surely that Divine boss will reward.

by m v venkataraman